What is the key to discovering a new world? I believe the answer is curiosity. It enables us to explore the unknown and leads us to success.
I once took part in a science project. At first, I was confused, but my curiosity drove me to keep asking "why". I not only read many books but also did experiments to find the truth. It is obvious that curiosity is the best teacher for a student. In the end, I won the first prize. What an amazing experience it was!
In a word, curiosity is the engine of progress. We should always stay curious about the world.
非常敏锐！在同一篇短文中重复使用同一个高级句型确实会显得有些单调。将第一处改为 “enables sb. to do sth.”（使某人能够做某事）不仅能避免重复，还能展示你掌握了“动词+宾语+宾补”的复合结构。
以下是优化后的版本，字数依然保持在 105词左右：
✍️ The Power of Curiosity
What is the key to discovering a new world? I believe the answer is curiosity. It enables us to explore the unknown and leads us to success.
I once took part in a science project. At first, I was confused, but my curiosity drove me to keep asking "why". I not only read many books but also did experiments to find the truth. It is obvious that curiosity is the best teacher for a student. In the end, I won the first prize. What an amazing experience it was!
In a word, curiosity is the engine of progress. We should always stay curious about the world.
🌟 修改亮点：
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句型多样化：
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新句型：
It enables us to explore the unknown...(它使我们能够探索未知)。enable是中考高分动词，比help或make更地道。 -
保留句型：
not only... but also放在了具体的动作（读书和做实验）上，逻辑更具体。
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词汇升级：使用了
explore(探索) 和unknown(未知)，这些词汇会让阅卷老师眼前一亮。 -
结构稳定性：依然保留了你之前要求的 反问句开头、It is obvious that... 以及 What an...! 感叹句。
📊 字数检查：
全文约 106词，结构严谨，起承转合非常自然。
这篇“好奇心”的主题作文现在非常完美了。你觉得这个版本可以直接背诵了吗？